Poetry ?

So I think i`m actually capable of writing poetry.. I`m just impatient...

& I get writers block too often...

But i found out, that when I`m just in my thinking|bored mode

I write some good shit, and I got some good feedback :)

So here`s a  semi short one..

I didn`t name it yet

I`ll love you `til i take my last breath

untill the casket shuts...

at my wake, I`ll be loving you

While people mourn and cry

I`ll be thinking of you

When it`s time for my corpse to be buried

I`ll be missing you

Loving you

Once my soul goes through the gates

I`ll be watching you

Loving you

But I am here today

So tell me you love me

It doesn't have to be eternal

Don't have to be immortal

Just take me into your arms

& Say you love me

Because for me, I`ll love you

til death do us part

Scratch that,

my love will end a day after never

So when I look you in your eyes

And tell you I love you

Cherish it,

Because that means I`ll love you forever.

-Relz